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Poetical Challenging
Posted On 05/20/2008 08:36:09 by JuWells

Based on Euni's challenge to write a poem using specific words (and I wasn't clear on if I had to use 75 words or if I couldn't use any MORE than 75 so anyway I used 43 and this is the last thing I'm gonna use as procrastination regarding my marketing piece thingie (combo resume/porfolio/business card to give out and mail so maybe someday in a not-so-far-away galaxy someone will hire me to do some kinda, I dunno, work, or summat).

 

"Another Freakin' Poem"

By Jules

 

 

Consider a life

Shattered as if porcelain

Denied grace

 

Killing apathy

Brings the dusk of that specific day

Into clear focus

 

A moment of decision, regret, what if

No conscious choice

An interpretation

The bargain struck and broken

 

Always anticipating the second chance

 

(end)

 

And I think everyone should take the challenge, it's fun! The words your gotta use are:

 

interpret, bargain, consider, apathy, dusk,
deny, shatter, specific, anticipate and porcelain

And according to Euni, you gotta use at least five of them but if you ONLY use five, then you only get 50 words to play with and if you use all ten words then you get 75 words.

So...yeah. 

 

Tags: Poetry Poems Challenge Words



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05/21/2008 01:10:49
i could bargain, but why mess with my life?
its fate right, so please dont stress and i wont fight!

i consider many things, but i retort to the better.
my skins tough like porcelain my hearts light like a feather

ive done seen the worst of weather and the best of times shatter!
ive done trudged through the hate and destroyed the mouths of chatter!!!

i dont deny my wrong doings, many people make mistakes!?!?!
ill make a few more in my life..... at least i anticipate!!!

to be specific... my mind i cant interpret?
but... many days at dusk i have battled with the serpent!!!

no apathy, i run wothout worry or fear!!!
i steer but the direction..... it seems quite unclear!!!




05/20/2008 20:06:45
I used 51 including the 10,



Dusk falls, the porcelain moon rises,
 

I anticipate the storm,



Windows shatter, trees fall,



I consider the damage,
  



Deny
the fear, and interpret as excitement,


Feel apathy for the broken,


Winds intensify, 



Fear increases.

  



I bargain with God,

 





SAVE ME!

 



Darkness!

  

The sun shines,
 

 

The specifics elude me,


 


I am saved!



05/20/2008 19:10:32

Wow, I really like this one!

 

Seems a lot of peple took part in this challenge - I will find another one. :)

 

I wrote two more today as part of this challenge - and will type them up. :)) After I am done with a few things. :) See ya later. :)) 



05/20/2008 09:37:45
I'm impressed! Very good!  I'm going to try this one.




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