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Poetry

By: CumfyC
Mood: awed
Date: 06/26/2007 17:14:03
Music: The Wickermix


After reading a poem by Reverie  I felt compeled to post up this...

I wrote this during a period when I was examining my feelings for someone and I wrote as a self question and answer session..

I think it is quite self explainetory..

What If?

What if you felt something?

That you have never felt before?

Would you ignore it?

Or embrace its natural force?

I'm actually embracing

Act on?

Perhaps I would

But just now it's not practical

I understand

Understood?

I could ignore what I felt

And say I imagined the whole thing

But that would be denial

Reject full

To all

It did bring.

So

What if it was my imagination?

Or

All in my head

Would that mean that I'm not in touch with myself?

Soul separated from head?

And

They say that what will be

Will be

Who?

What?

Controls my destiny

I feel it's me but

There's something more

The coincidence is breathtaking

Far too much to ignore

So I'm thinking ……..

What do I do?

I might have to sit this one thru

Not in negativity

But just to see

That I'm not imagining it and

These feelings are true

I'm

Lost

In some clouds

That haze in my mind

Found

In a sense

My emotions define

Gaining understanding

Some questions I pose

Indirect but meaningful

Yeah

Here goes

If someone had an effect on you

Would you have an effect on them too?

If you're thinking of someone

Are they thinking about you?

And

What if I felt something?

Did you feel it too?

15/05/04







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From: CumfyC
06/27/2007 11:50:44

Interestingly..

The person in question was actually with someone at the time and I didn't want to intefere with that relationship..

when I said " Act on? Perhaps I would, But just now it's not practical,

I understand, Understood? "

was me clearing that part up... I felt I had to..

I really enjoyed writing it and it helped me examine all of the pro's con's and possibilities.

Thank you for your comments.. I'm looking to see what else I have written..

Cumfy Love x  x



From: itsjules
06/26/2007 18:42:07

I loved it, Chris. To me, it seem to cover all the confusion and self-doubt and hope and fear that comes when you really feel something for someone.

More more more!



From: Reverie
06/26/2007 18:30:50
Yeah, I think I can relate here.  I've often wondered how emotion can at times seem one-sided.  How much of it is wishful thinking?  Yet, I hope that at least some is true.  I enjoyed this.








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