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My Poem

By: Johnisred
Mood: in love
Date: 02/05/2008 15:31:34
Music: None


Any thoughts on this, I've haven't wrote poetry in a while, admiteddly I'm keen on writing a short story.  Anyway here is an attempt. 

The Blonde -

The common, the mixed up

The supposed go for, the chatted up

stared at, sought at, smiled at

wanted, needed, pleaded 

The stupid, - supposedly,

but red evidently, 

Handful, careful, wonderful, beautiful,

the rare, the exotic, the prepared

The Red

 

 







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02/06/2008 00:06:28

i really like this a lot, and yes, as euni says, more, please.



02/05/2008 20:09:45

John,

this is a great stream of consciousness prose! I appreciate it! Keep up the great attempts.....and keep sharing! 









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