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Poetry challenge
Posted On 06/14/2008 11:56:12 by EuniceCrankyponts

I took another poetry challenge and I fear this poem is not my best work...but hey I had a limited amount of words to work with and a maximum of thirty lines.

 

Ug, this one was tough! I am not even sure if I like it and I know I will edit this one at a later date when my mind is not full of mush.....READ ON:

 

The list of words:

 

yellow, lost, delay, tree, decided, followed,

ordinary, sleep, intimidated, obsession

 

 

I wore my yellow shirt today

My favorite

I think it accentuates

My positive

Yet, still feeling lost in the crowd

I wandered aimlessly

You found me

We talked for a while

Then you were gone

Our time cut short

A delay to your response

I lost patience and decided to climb a tree

Angered by the very words

Uttered from your mouth

From somewhere deep within your soul

You denied me

Climbing higher and higher

Until I fell

Yet, you came back to catch me

I felt safe in knowing

You were there

This feeling is far from ordinary

For a long time our souls sleep

Until inspired by another

Finding the other

When not even looking

One intimidated to scare you away

You remain

The obsession of another

Meant to harm the two

Only bring them closer

Denying any other

 



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06/15/2008 03:18:52
Bravo.
That appears to be a tough one but you got there...and in a little style too.
It is one That I shall attempt.
Thanks for that.


06/15/2008 01:29:25
I really like this one, Euni, and I will do this challenge very soon. Thanks so much for always sharing, and for the poetry challenges, they're super-cool


06/14/2008 12:40:40

Really, honestly, speaking truly.

I really, really, really, really do like this.

It resonates, and it has charm for me.





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