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Challenge-She Hides in Mirrors
Posted On 06/27/2008 10:05:13 by reddMary
She hides in mirrors
No one sees her
She barely sees herself
They look right through her
As if she has no existence

She's nothing fancy
Remarkable; not at all
She hides in mirrors
And will stay hidden until death stumbles upon her

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From: PhillipS1961
06/27/2008 17:31:18
This is so from the heart, Mary, I love it  


From: littlered
06/27/2008 16:41:14
Awww, this such a heart felt  poem, with depth and well written.


From: Juless
06/27/2008 16:31:44
Mary I LOVE this, just adore it. It IS dark, but I think the best poetry is kinda dark, longing, yearning, ya know?

Really great job!


From: BikerRed
06/27/2008 11:23:45
Many do not understand the dark or comprehend the comfort it brings. Most cannot even begin to articulate it Mary..only the few, and you

From: Ethrad
06/27/2008 10:20:20

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Your poetry is so deep; I feel I can never compete. So I really thank you for your comment.  In my eyes, you win all the poetry challenges (for the dark side).

Sure you can compete, I'm not that good. I just write random words down and hope they look good, lol.

Oh, by the way, I can't comment back to your profile due to age limitations.


From: Ethrad
06/27/2008 10:09:50

I like this one. Very good, indeed.

http://www.redhedd.com/blog/view/id_5155/

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