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poetry challenge
Posted On 06/30/2008 16:03:37 by _DEUCE_

ok everyone keeps doing challenges heres mine 

use feelings, electricity,ignite, connection and expain






Why do we ignore our feelings
towards one another
I can't explain in mere words how
I love you so.
I can see it in your eyes that you
feel for me more than you let on.
I guarantee our love will last if
we let our feelings come out in the open
We shall share our first kiss and the
electricity between us shall ignite.
I can not explain in the slights of
words how much I am in love with you.
I just can't understand why we
chose to ignore our feelings towards one another.
When I know for sure we share
a connection between the two of us



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06/30/2008 18:07:41
nice work and challenge accpeted!


06/30/2008 18:07:25
This is really beautiful and heartfelt, hottie, and I'll take it too


06/30/2008 17:51:31
Lovely, I shall accept this challenge Mr. Deuce.


06/30/2008 16:32:09
thank you littlered and lizzie


06/30/2008 16:31:15

:O that was beautiful!!

I love your poetry sweetie :)  



06/30/2008 16:31:02
Wow!!!!!, you do, indeed, write some beautiful, poetry. This is great!!!!!!!




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