They had argued the night before and went to bed mad.When she awoke, he was already gone.  She put on her makeup;carefully pulling up her sheer stockings.  She dressed in her trade mark mini and red high heel shoes.
They day seemed endless at the office and after a beastly hour long drive home;she finally turned into her driveway.
"His truck's not here. I'm going to take a long, hot shower"she thought.  She had the water hot and the shower massage at the right setting.  The tension eased in her shoulders while the shower massage pleased.
Suddenly, the shower door opened.  She gasped.  He stood there naked;all 10" proudly jutting in front of him.  The argument from the night before was instantly forgotten.
He helped dry her off; while fingering her the whole time.  They barely made it to bed without falling.She started sucking his huge dick;had to start slowly then,ever so pleasurably was able to get all 10" in her mouth and throat.
He flipped her over on the bed and starting licking.  She moaned with delight.  As he hit THE spot, she came and he licked that up.
He jammed his throbbing cork into her.  She loved every inch of it and screamed for him to slam her harder.
He was able to delight her by keeping it going as long as she wanted and needed. She came and came;moaning with the thrill of the sensations.
He then exploded into her with one last ramming of his hips.
They slept contentedly.



This is the first time I've ever written erotica.

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ReddMary

Good comedy for sure!

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How freckley are you?

Maybe not so much erotica but smut.  Sorry.  Not good at telling stories.

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ReddMary

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WHAT YOU DO HERE...WHAT YOU SEE HERE....WHAT YOU HEAR HERE....LET IT STAY HERE....WHEN YOU LEAVE HERE...!.!

I'm no expert, and not what you'd call a good writer, but I think you have some potential, for sure.

The only thing I'd say is just maybe think more about detail. Other than that, just keep writing, write down every idea, and then you'll develop your style.

Seriously, keep going, and thanks for sharing and this was not bad for a first try!

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“It is observed that
the redhaired of
both sexes are more
libidinous and mischievous
than the rest.”
Gulliver’s Travels, Jonathon Swift

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[i]People are strange, when you're a stranger...[/i]

^^HA!!

Anyone here seen Johnny Dangerously?

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Pelirrojophilia

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“It is observed that
the redhaired of
both sexes are more
libidinous and mischievous
than the rest.”
Gulliver’s Travels, Jonathon Swift

reddMary wrote: Maybe not so much erotica but smut.  Sorry.  Not good at telling stories.

Know what the difference is between "erotica" and "smut/porn"?

"Erotica" is still interesting after you're done masturbating!

Ya gots promise, kiddo. Plenty here to like. Like Jules saith, just zoom in on the details. You can write the basic "plot" of action out first from start to end, kinda like you did here, then go back and mentally play it back in slow motion to, er, flesh it out some more.  I did that over the course of weeks or months on my own knotty story (posted elsewhere here) before I felt it was complete enough to let loose in the wilds of the Intarwebs.

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Charlie Brown seeking the Red Haired Girl