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| POSTED BY: Joools on 06/02/2008 17:04:39 |
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Okies, another poetry challenge. Alliterative, alphabetical, Haiku. Pour example, since I'm first, I'll use a, b, and c Each word in each line must start with one letter. Standard 5-7-5 syllable arrangement. Try to give an impression or a feeling, doesn't have to "make sense" but the words should relate to each other somehow. Always almost all Bountiful beautiful birds Circumnavigate I think this might turn out funny... Anyway, next person uses d, e, and f. Have at it :)
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"The world was made for those not cursed
with self-awareness. -- "Annie Savoy," Bull Durham
The rest of us are fu.cked. -- Me
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| POSTED BY: Joools on 06/02/2008 17:31:49 |
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Ethrad wrote:
Anticipations, beyond comprehension.
Do either fail? Glorious, he'll interpret justice.
Killing liars; madness, madness, madness, mad!
Details on challenge:
http://www.redhedd.com/public/forum/posts/id_425/post_reply/
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That's very cool, Rad, but it's not the challenge. You were to use the letter d ONLY for the first line, e ONLY for the second, and f only for the third. And only five syllables for the first and third lines and seven syllables for the second. Go again 
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"The world was made for those not cursed
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The rest of us are fu.cked. -- Me
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Happiness is red I will never change my hair Jump me if I do
Just of the top of my head ill do better when ive got more time
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Strawberry blonde is not ginger!
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| POSTED BY: Casper on 06/02/2008 22:22:47 |
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REDDontheHEDD wrote:
Karol is so awesome Losers cant compare to her my ego is HUGE!! :P HH ((is that right?))
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HHHHHHAAAAAAA That is fecking great
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| POSTED BY: Casper on 06/02/2008 22:23:51 |
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Judy justifies the jurisprudence jig while juggling giant jugs at the jungle gym Wait... that's a tongue twister.
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Nescience need naught, omnipotent omphalos- purports 'Panjandrum'.
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Malkovich Malkovich?!
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| POSTED BY: Pinkie on 06/03/2008 04:08:55 |
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Since a haiku is supposed to reflect a moment in nature... Quiesent quiet Reflecting red radiance Slowly setting sun
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Yes, I really am...
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| POSTED BY: Joools on 06/03/2008 05:24:36 |
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ivorytubs wrote:
Nescience need naught, omnipotent omphalos- purports 'Panjandrum'.
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FIRST one done RIGHT! Love you to Smithereens, Mango Also, it's cool 
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"The world was made for those not cursed
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| POSTED BY: Joools on 06/03/2008 05:25:09 |
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PinkZebra wrote:
Since a haiku is supposed to reflect a moment in nature... Quiesent quiet Reflecting red radiance Slowly setting sun
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Another done right!! Nice job, Pinky, and it's pretty, too, and atmospheric
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titian redhead
undulating over
varicose ankles
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Run, run, as fast as you can. You can't catch me, i'm the ginger head man!
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