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poetry? mind fart?
Posted On 06/18/2008 01:48:54 by elpelodelfuego
my lifes been real bad... but my lifes been really good
my lifes been kinda had but my lifes been really should

my lifes full of many negatives and many positves
my lifes been full of many pleasure trips and many politics

my lifes been hectic, my lifes been crazy
my lifes been blessed with things both beautiful and amazing

does it phase me? maybe, maybe not i dont even think and
all i can keep on thinking is that my life is on the brink damn

i blink to think it goes away oh my
i gotta live fast i really cant live a slow life

oh why.... who knows..........just sit back and listen
am i myself, am i ahead or am i losing position

what is my mission..... why was i even brought about
i guess that is a vision for me just to talk to god about

its getting hotter out.... yes, its burning now
im finally using my brain.... im finally learning now

ive finally figured out what the source of the heat was
ive finally figured out why im important and its because.....



"ive got to change my mind i got to get it right
ive got to change my life if it takes all day and night
ive got to close my eyes.... me i got to think
im getting real close, i think im at the brink
i blink and it all goes away.... no
what did you think? i was gonna call it day? NO!!!!"



enjoy life because youll never figure it out!!!!



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06/18/2008 06:31:46
This is so true, Matty. Great poem to. 


06/18/2008 06:21:05
Very good; very expressive and very true.


06/18/2008 05:41:07
This is really good, expressive. I like it


06/18/2008 02:31:11
I like this, Matty, it captures the confusion and chaos and wondering that most people experience.

Nice job




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