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poetry challenge!
Posted On 06/30/2008 18:06:33 by elpelodelfuego
feelings, electricity, ignite, connection, explain


i am something you should never ignite
yet.... you give me these feelings of instabilty
i try to explain our electricity hopelessly
you turn away and the connection is lost.....

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From: lizziedrip
07/01/2008 10:03:37
I like it, good job :D

From: littlered
07/01/2008 05:20:50
Aww, pensive, yet poignant!

From: Lunarstorm777
07/01/2008 04:15:16
That feeling your getting.... Yeah, thats the electricity igniting your connector.... No more connections for you.... Why? Do I really have to explain it?


From: Matt_M
06/30/2008 23:27:31

Please explain your confused feelings.

Toward poetry and its wretched "artistic" ceilings.

For a poem looks queer and trite when forced to steer away from it's divine right. 

Forever I will stay.

This noble connection to mother freedom.

Her bosom our conception.

In thy passing I will not moan but mirth.

Your own rebirth you shall ignite like the mythological phoenix on it's very first electric night.

From: Redei
06/30/2008 19:25:29
Hummm - Your touch is an electricity of feelings that ignites a connection that is far too difficult to explain so I won't.. and you shouldn't so it is and we are and well what else is there reallly?


From: elpelodelfuego
06/30/2008 18:48:54
lol


From: Casper
06/30/2008 18:16:47

How many times must I explain..

when you make a connection between a natural gas line and electricity

It will leave you with burnings feelings.  

 

:-) 

From: EuniceCrankyponts
06/30/2008 18:09:49
I will take you up on your challenge; however, it will be a little bit because I have a paper to complete for my course...maybe tomorrow. :)

From: Schmoo
06/30/2008 18:08:24
I really like this, Matty, it's very yearning. Very nice job!


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