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Sonnet I Stumbled Upon
Posted On 07/01/2008 01:09:26 by Schmoo

Ode to Your God Damned Body

Many times, we slipped into your bed anxiously.
I would trace the velvet and stone in your hips
With my fingers, and lift my eyes from your shoulder to see
yours that have drifted to sleep. I part your lips
with mine. I would kiss your neck, the slithering
and silky snake that it is. You would awaken, lay
your fake arms around me. Unaware, my heart, withering,
did offer itself to those brown eyes, that would play
me songs. All the while, the songs I thought were riddles
were goodbye’s and hello’s to hosts of others, new.
So here’s a song for you, while you sit and while you fiddle
And dream of all the wonders to explore: fu.ck You.
The dark pools in your face, that I thought
Beautiful, are only reflections of your soul – lesson taught.






I think this is gorgeous and searing and I just had to share.

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07/01/2008 22:41:18
Wonderful... especially liked the lesson taught line.... so fits and caused fits I'm sure too!  Loved it!!


07/01/2008 10:12:21
Just exactly who is this by? Because from looking through the comments it seems you posted it for another.


07/01/2008 06:02:31
OOOO Little, she's gonna LOVE hearing that!

And yours too, Philly.

I'm'a "make" her write more

I'm bossy, I can DO it


07/01/2008 06:00:19
When you said you stumbled on it and then I read it,  I thought that it was from one of our great poets of time gone. But, blooming heck!; Hillary you are one talented baby!!!! You can draw, write classics like this, play musical instruments, take professional photography, and you are a cute, sexy lady to boot! You are a classy all rounder!


07/01/2008 05:46:28
Awww, Hills this is sooo evocative, I loved it 


07/01/2008 01:54:49
I din't write it, frochy, hills did.


07/01/2008 01:47:09
oh, and where did you get that?? fake arms?? you talking about war amputees?? hahahaha kidding, it truly is a beautiful poem juli


07/01/2008 01:46:32
my eyes are green/blue btw. :P


07/01/2008 01:44:37

as far as my own standards go i try to avoid "fuck yous"

buttttttttttttttt im not hillary and i did not feel what she felt

i like it



07/01/2008 01:43:31

gasp!!

 

its amazing!!!

 

hills wow!!! 



07/01/2008 01:34:54
YESS!! SHE OWNED UP!!

And yes, I AM happy how, Hills, you needed to take credit for this; it's AMAZING!


07/01/2008 01:33:48

Ugh! All right! I admit it, I wrote it.

 

I took poetry in college. I was 17 and a hunchback dumped me after having slept with my friend....in front of me.

So that explains the angst.

 

sigh.

 

Happy now, Jules? lol



07/01/2008 01:32:36
I know, it's AMAZING! I only WISH I could write like that!




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