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Ethrad: True Reflection
Posted On 06/27/2008 09:45:01 by Ethrad
Perfection, in reverse.
Trembling,
Through one's purse.
Cover the sore;
Such a curse.
She hides in mirrors.
Next, a hearse.

Challenge by: Jules

Quote:

She hides in mirrors.

Tags: Ethrad Poem True Reflection Challenge Jules



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Viewing 1 - 6 out of 6 Comments

06/27/2008 20:40:35
To me it seems almost an indictment of shallowness, and how this woman is so obsessed with presenting a perfect outside that she's hidden her true self, nigh unto death.



06/27/2008 16:57:28
Good stuff!


06/27/2008 16:13:42
Really interesting direction, Rad, and VERY dark. Me likie


06/27/2008 15:47:52
She isn't dead yet!

Cool, I may have one for this little challenge too.  We shall see what I can come up.


06/27/2008 14:38:07
I guess the women died ! O_o


06/27/2008 11:26:41
we both seemed to have killed her off in our poems! nice work




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